I liked this. A lot. I think the last stanza could stand alone as a poem. The power of it does not need any metaphors. Sometimes less is more. Good work.
What a wonderful memory of something enjoyed before your father's departure. This was so lovely and beautifully written. We never know when it is our turn, so live life and laugh when we can, so that we may leave a beautiful lasting impression for the ones we leave behind. This was definitely a poem I will not forget very soon. Lovely
I liked this. A lot. I think the last stanza could stand alone as a poem. The power of it does not need any metaphors. Sometimes less is more. Good work.
What a wonderful memory of something enjoyed before your father's departure. This was so lovely and beautifully written. We never know when it is our turn, so live life and laugh when we can, so that we may leave a beautiful lasting impression for the ones we leave behind. This was definitely a poem I will not forget very soon. Lovely